1. reflection on Rufus's feedback

From the feedback that Rufus gave me, I saw that he was very interested in the way memory is stored. Because he repeatedly mentioned that he wanted to know more details of the Moon Memory Station. This shows that the main plot of this novel is eye-catching, which is exactly what I want to do in the writing of the  unfinished chapter 3.

I will describe how M works at the Moon Memory Station and how to enter N's memory to explore the strange events that happened in the afternoon when N disappeared.

Rufus also asked me two questions:
The love between humans and AI has been discussed by many writers. How should I innovate?
Is the audience rooting for M and N to be together again or will be thinking that their relationship was doomed from the start?

These two issues are worth thinking about. Readers will find answers in the third chapter of the full version. The way M and N contact again, and the way N appearances again, will make the reader feel the unusual connection between them.

2.reflection on Hao Lu‘s Feedback

Hao Lu believes that this fiction explores profound issues about life, but also reflects my attitude towards science and art, as well as my vision of the designer's future professional content. At the same time, she also saw the possibility of visual design that I explored in the fiction. She thinks this is a commendable aspect.  

A thousand readers have a thousand Hamlet, and everyone will remember the information they want to remember most. Hao ’s comment points are not the same as Rufus. I am very happy to hear different voices. This is a kind of communication and contact with readers. I hope everyone can get what they want in my fiction. If everyone's comment has only one voice, it means that people have no debate, which means that this is a boring fiction. So I am happy to listen to all kinds of interesting discussions.

Even though Hao gave me an A score on Knowledge and Reflection, it was B on Communication. Hao said she wanted to see detailed and deeper descriptions of the small topics in the fiction. This is the same as Rufus's point of view. I will add more details in Chapter 2 and a further description in Chapter 3.